My entry for Nav's Hallowe'en contest:
I Made This Lamp
Flames lick patterns up inside the green, curved glass.
Hurrying through the streets, a cold wind whips and claims the light.
Turning away from the cruel weather, matches spill amongst wet flagstones.
Darkness closes in, coats the buildings, the streets, my lamp with thick, gloomy paint.
The audible heartbeat of panic augments as cats scream their macabre midnight song.
Finding dry matches! One is struck; the oil and rain soaked wick spits a modest light.
Shadows beget curious wall demons curling their twisted tendrils towards me.
They caress me, for I am the demons’ master. I send them forth.
here's a link to Matt Dinniman's site if you would like to enter the contest yourself.
Not that anyone reads my blog..
I Made This Lamp
Flames lick patterns up inside the green, curved glass.
Hurrying through the streets, a cold wind whips and claims the light.
Turning away from the cruel weather, matches spill amongst wet flagstones.
Darkness closes in, coats the buildings, the streets, my lamp with thick, gloomy paint.
The audible heartbeat of panic augments as cats scream their macabre midnight song.
Finding dry matches! One is struck; the oil and rain soaked wick spits a modest light.
Shadows beget curious wall demons curling their twisted tendrils towards me.
They caress me, for I am the demons’ master. I send them forth.
here's a link to Matt Dinniman's site if you would like to enter the contest yourself.
Not that anyone reads my blog..


14 Comments:
At Sunday, 08 October, 2006,
Anonymous said…
I do :)
Cwiss
At Tuesday, 10 October, 2006,
Robert Muñoz said…
What?
Goddammit, how am I supposed to compete with that?!?!?!
At Wednesday, 11 October, 2006,
mist1 said…
Damn. Feeling intimidated now.
At Thursday, 19 October, 2006,
Lady Vampy said…
Oi I read your blog :D
At Monday, 23 October, 2006,
Robert Muñoz said…
Okay, I finally post mine and re-read yours.
Okay, you win.
I hang my head in shame.
At Wednesday, 25 October, 2006,
Sheepy said…
Golly I am thick, I thought no one read it because I didn't realise where the comments thing was :B
Stoopid sheep! Lol
In that case, I'll write more stuff!
Thank you guys.. And Robert, your story was brilliant! Don't hang your head in shame. *hug*
At Thursday, 26 October, 2006,
SMG said…
That prose was so rich. I feel like my own story reads too fast, I should have tried for more poetic mood.
This entry is fabtabulous.
At Thursday, 26 October, 2006,
Fredge said…
Very well done. Thick imagery.
At Thursday, 26 October, 2006,
larisse said…
Some really great imagery here. You should expand on this story. I'd like to know how this person became a demon master.
At Thursday, 26 October, 2006,
emeraldcite said…
Well done! Your use of language is enviable!
At Friday, 27 October, 2006,
Sophonax said…
Nice. I like it.
At Friday, 27 October, 2006,
Sheepy said…
Goodness, thank you everyone! *blushes*
At Saturday, 28 October, 2006,
Dawno said…
Beautiful!
At Monday, 30 October, 2006,
D.T. Kelly said…
Nice story. Please don't send demons my way. ;)
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